Some of the detail in the tagged profile about parents and siblings could be concatenated across two census reports (I think it was just two in which the subject was still living with parents). That would help keep the focus on the subject.
Marriage(s) and Children can be summarized much in the same way, instead of having a distinct paragraph for everything reported in each census as a standalone.
I can find an example profile if this comment isn't clear. It is nice that you've structured everything chronologically, but it is possible to preserve the facts about the subject in more of a summary format that doesn't introduce quite so much detail on immediate family in a time study type of presentation.
True, sometimes differences between census reports need presenting and discussion when they don't exactly reconcile or when distinct and significant similarities or conflicts are apparent. Nothing like that seems to apply to this person, which is why I would suggest using less detail about siblings, for example, especially across census years.
Using summary paragraphs about all of the detail from each census makes the story about your subject get lost in those very details.
Thank you for sharing this profile.
