I think it's fine for the most part. I do see that you only have personal knowledge for a source. There's nothing wrong with such sources, but you should add information from other places which others can verify. I looked at another of your profiles and you had just Ancestry.com as a source. This is too general to be a real source. I add a lot of sources from Ancestry but give a description of the information there and a link to the actual page on ancestry. When you're ready, I'd also suggest you use the inline sourcing method to indicate what facts are available on a source. You can read in the help files how to do it, and feel free to look at any of my profiles which are open to see how it's done and what it looks like. One other thing I'm not sure is a rule, but I think I've read somewhere, which is to not add pictures or icons which move on their own. They're distracting IMO. But don't take my word on that. So, as I said, generally a fine profile and lots of interesting reading.
