Checking in From Beautiful Bloomington, Illinois! 36F now heading for 52F Sunny!
Home Front: The H.S. graduation party for my granddaughter has past, the family left and the house is quiet! Most of us are sick and two have Covid! I'm sick too, but breathing much better today! But it was fun! (I think)
Genealogy Front: I'm coasting the rest of the month, currently 1433 contributions for Feb.
The Book: I'm making great progress. My imagination is running wild. I write, then meditate on what the story needs and how to tell it an exciting way. Then meditate and dream up more stuff, figure out where I need to back and reinforce the sub-plots, polish, polish, polish! I have AI re-write capability, but I don't use it much. I use it to get an idea how to word scenes, then delete the rewrite. I like my way!
- "By the numbers:"
- Chapter 1: 5748 words
- Chapter 2: 7159 words
- Chapter 3: 4812 words
- Chapter 4: 5066 words
- Chapter 5: 762 and continuing all weekend long
- Total Words: 23,547
- Goal 85,000 words
- 61,453 more to write! I'm approaching 33% completion
Saturday Edit: I was really sick and exhusted yesterday. Feeling much better!
This is Black History Month: My book is kind of about that, more into slavery issues in the period between 1781 and 1865.
What is the book about: Ira Dillingham Draper Underground Railroad Station Master Easiest way to explain it!
The above (What is the book about?) isn't exactly correct...I told that story in his profile already. FYI: Mellissa Jamison and I polished that profile (her research and my writing) for the benefit of the Iowa Historical Society to their Freedom Trail Project! This is the neatest discovery in my entire life. The IHS agreed. Ira Dillingham Draper was never on their radar!
What the book is REALLY about:
This 85,000+ word book is based on this one short sentence from The History of the Draper Family by Mabell Estela (Draper Hummel: Celia (wife of Ira Dillingham Draper) was bound out as a child and never spoke of her childhood.
This sentence disturbed me! What I learned because of my research and WikiTree profiles already created by my cousins I never knew of was mindboggling!
Facts: Celia Means Draper is my 2nd great grandmother. Before she was born her father and grandfathers and uncles and cousins fought in the Battle of Guilford Courthouse in Greensboro, NC. Robert Means and Elijah Joyce fight in that battle and their kids get marred to each other. Celia is the last of 9 children to be born in 1817 to William and Susan (Joyce) Means. Both families live very close to each other west of modern day Stoneville, NC (south of Martinsville, VA). In 1822 (Celia is 5 years old) her grandfather and dad die. 4 years later (age 9) her mother dies. She is "Bound Out", probably to an older sister already married. My theory is that she gets separated from her younger siblings, especially her sister Nancy who is two years older.
The next thing the family history states is that Celia and all her siblings, except 1 older sister who is married and living in Madison, NC have moved to Shelby County, Indiana. Celia, her siter Nancy and her brother William meet the Draper family and marry into it. 3 siblings married 3 siblings...and they all stick together and move to Iowa! It is now 1850, and they all get caught up in the UGRR. The Knights of the Golden Circle get wind of their activities and send in the bounty hunters! My family is wanted "Dead or Alive" preferably DEAD! This is the second proverbial "chase scene" in the book to keep the reader on the edge of their seat! The first chase scene is when Celia, as a young girl, helps a slave escape, and they get run down and captured. Lots of fiction nail biting action adventure in this part!
Celia had to be messed up emotionally. PTSD, depression and anxiety getting triggered by various events, smells and visible things she saw. Celia lives in a society that accepts slavery, yet she marries an abolitionist, my 2nd great grandfather, Ira Dillingham Draper! She is separated from her siblings, but they all end up in Indiana together! I attempt to explain all of this in my book, a fictionalized novel based on real people and real events. I need to make my self cry when I write, so the reader will cry! I need to break out in laughter when I write a segment, so the reader will also. I need to write with anger about the brutal treatment of slaves, so my readers will have murder in their hearts for the bad actors.I need to make the reader love this story! Pretty intense, huh?
The book is COMPLICATED (that is a good thing)
Target audience: Women However, this is also an "Action Adventure Western" with a lot of fighting that men should enjoy, and, after all the story is being told by me, a man, so there is plenty of pretty neat fight scenes. As for you girls: Celia is a very strong woman that has emotional flaws and bouts with childhood depression, triggered at the most inconvenient times. In real life I deal with those type of problems in my family and I am using those people, who suffer the same things as Celia, as my models. I don't try to fix the problems of PTSD in the book or in my family. I describe it and tell how the problem is battled. Repressed fears, guilt and trauma over losing loved ones has to heal with help from those who show love, not from caustic ones who say, "Just snap out of it" or "You are faking it, trying to get attention."
Eventually, I will need "Beta Readers" That could happen in March. A Beta Reader is the critic before the real critics tear the work to pieces and make the writer feel like the floor of a taxi cab! 
Reality Check: So many people are writing books, even great books, that there are not enough publishers to go around. Also, if a publisher accepts to read it, they have to determine if people will buy the book. If I self-publish, I'm told I will have to spend 14 hours a day promoting it to, well, everybody! I don't feel up to that task. So, because we have Free Space pages, eventually all of you can read the book. This might be a first for WikiTree!