Need Help doing further justice to this Victoria Cross winner

Question

I created the profile for Samuel Mitchell during one of the Connectathons and have done a Biography for him. He was the first person presented a Victoria Cross in New South Wales, Australia according to his Wikipedia page .

Can anyone do some further improvements to his profile as I am unsure what else i can do. 

Thank you for any assistance.

Comments

corrected rank & filled in some detail

Answer 1

I see some conflicting information, something that you might want to clear up. You say in the bio that Samuel was the son of William Mitchell and Eleanor Field. However the sources attached in support of his birth show parents were William Mitchell and Helen Unknown.

You do have an 1850 Census attached showing a Samuel Mitchell about the right age, but is it the right Samuel as his mother is Eleanor, not Helen?

Comments

Helen, Ellen, and Eleanor / Elinor / Elinore (etc) can be interchangeable.  Throw in the occasional Ethel as well.